Short Story Title Illustration: Pulled Towards the Sea 2 versions

 I am working on a multimedia project of sorts. The first part is a short story with a few illustrations. I wanted to try for a look as if ink was scraped off a white board. I used to do this a lot when I was young when I would buy pre-inked boards to work with. I liked the old fashioned "etching look". In addition to the writing and drawing, I have started creating the sets for an animated version. Both are already written out, the script version is simpler and the short story version is a little deeper into the subject. I haven't written an original script from scratch for any of my gothic horror animations so this is a first and personal project. 

The size and format was determined by the page size so it would fit when it finally published maybe months to a year or more from now. I can't decide if the figure is too finely rendered or nicely ambiguous.  think, hope the it is obvious that it is a person in the air. She should be a little smaller but then she would only a white blob.  I have thought of adding a grey tone to the cliffs and the skin on the person but that cancels out the etching look I want. No hurry I guess to decide. 

EDIT: another version.

Adding clouds looked confusing in this style. My friend Keamy wanted me to try it with the figure still on the edge and I added a moon to balance out the composition. I think I like it better. What do I know?